She is my dearest

She was like a breeze,
Put my senses to freeze!
When her smile was felt,
My cold heart just melt!!

She opened her mouth to speak,
I fell for the dimple in her cheek!
The words came out as roses,
I could cherish them for ages!!

Her hair were as soft as silk,
Her eyes as white as milk!
When her sun like face glowed,
It felt like even time had slowed!!

She was like a sweet angel,
Everything about her was noble!
She came like a sudden downpour,
What had hit me I wasn’t sure!!

Her spirit was infectious,
Her heart the most spacious!
The soul of hers was the purest,
In no time she was my dearest!!

Responses

  1. Kunal Avatar

    I hope the ‘she’ is not your thunderbird

  2. gunjan kathuria Avatar
    gunjan kathuria

    dedicated to whom ???????

  3. Sumit Gupta Avatar

    Not dedicated to anyone in particular

  4. mugdha Avatar

    His would be daughter.
    aise hi khayal aate hain bandon ko ek umar ke baad 😛

    vaise poem is very cute. can direct it to destined destination. would work.

    1. Sumit Gupta Avatar

      @Mugdha – Life would be so easy if poems ‘would work’ this way!!

  5. Deeksha Avatar

    Nice nice…Ati Uttam baccha… 🙂

  6. gargi Avatar

    A nicely written poem for someone special 🙂 May I know who is the lucky one ?

  7. Sumit Gupta Avatar

    It doesn’t matter who is the lucky one, what matters is that am I the lucky one for someone 😉

  8. Tripti Avatar

    I have read this before, but reading again was as refreshing as the first time.
    Hope you get all good things in life.
    All the best!!!
    P.S. Have you altered this from the original one.

    1. Sumit Gupta Avatar

      Nopes… Its the original one.. can’t alter this one 🙂

  9. Jyoti Arora Avatar

    Very nice. Must be quite a lady 🙂

  10. Saru Singhal Avatar

    Lovely poem…The words are used so beautifully…

    Saru

  11. meenu chawla Avatar
    meenu chawla

    nice!!

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